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Critiques—Feedback and Workshopping of New Musicals


It's been said that musicals are not so much written as they are rewritten. Receiving helpful feedback is an invaluable part of the process. On this page you will find some details about available consultants or workshop programs.

The first three listed below offer a range of support, from evaluating initial treatments, to script review, to support for table or staged readings. The next group focuses on the book of the musical. You've heard of "story doctor" or "script doctor" - here are a few that will help musical book writers. Lastly we list evaluators who also evaluate music and lyrics, as well as the book.

SCRIPT REVIEW AND SUPPORT FOR READINGS: William Squier; CateCam Productions; New Musicals Inc.

SCRIPT REVIEW (focusing on the musical's book): Steve Cuden - Story Consultant; Anne Hamilton Dramaturgy; David Spencer; Stuart Spencer

BOOK, MUSIC, & LYRICS REVIEW: Jake Lloyd score and script consulting; Mainstreet Musicals Evaluation; Script Coverage from Davenport Theatrical; Harry Cohen


William Squier – Consultant Offering Feedback and Support for Readings

William Squier is an Emmy Award winner whose plays and musicals have been seen in NYC, regionally and abroad. He is also a journalist who writes frequently about the musical theater, including his "Growing Stages" column on this website, which profiles theaters and other organizations that develop new works.

For writers of new musicals, Bill is happy to offer the following consultation services:

Please contact Bill at musicalrxer@gmail.com for more information about these services and consultation fees.

CateCam Productions

Cate Cammarata works with playwrights at all stages of creative development to develop plays and musicals toward commercial production. She offers freelance and production dramaturgy, script consulting, and more. She provides one-on-one guidance through the page-to-stage process. She also manages all aspects of TRU's reading series. Contact her at TRUPlaysubmissions@gmail.com

New Musicals Inc – Many levels of feedback

For a specific fee, as listed on their website, Elise Dewsberry or others from New Musicals Inc of Los Angeles (NMI) will provide whatever feedback you need. NMI.org - incubator. They offer such things as:

They also offer services as an hourly rate: song spotting, lyric crafting, marketing, and producing advice. Many of the levels of feedback also include submission in the SEARCH for New Musicals – an annual contest which awards a workshop and concert reading in Los Angeles.


Steve Cuden, Story Consultant for Musicals

Are you struggling with your musical? Are you looking for special insight that may take your musical's story to the next level, maybe all the way to the top?  Steve Cuden can help you with expert evaluation and analysis of your musical's story or book.  Steve is the co-creator and co-lyricist of the Broadway and international hit musical, Jekyll & Hyde, and the author of the renowned book, Beating Broadway: How to Create Stories for Musicals That Get Standing Ovations. Steve’s tips and suggestions are frequently featured in the Musical Writerzine. For more information and to contact Steve, please go to www.beatingbroadway.com.

Hamilton Dramaturgy

Tip from Hamilton Dramaturgy: When is it time to send your new musical to a dramaturg?

Need a Musical Script Consultant or "Script Doctor"?

Anne Hamilton is the principal of Hamilton Dramaturgy, a consulting practice now located in Bucks County, PA. She has eighteen years of experience in the professional theatre in New York City, across the country, and internationally. The majority of her clients are located in New York and Los Angeles, and she welcomes clients from any corner of the world. Her clients have gone on to win the Pulitzer Prize, the MacArthur "Genius" Award, the Tony ® Award, and a Royal Court International Residency. For writers of musicals, Anne offers a specialized service including: an intake session where the authors voice their concerns about any aspect of the book, lyrics or music to which she should pay special attention; a line by line read through of the book, with comments made in the body of the script; a careful review of the music and lyrics; a list of recommendations; and an hour-long follow-up consultation with the collaborators on the subject of their choice. Hamiltonlit.com

David Spencer Tips and Consultations

David Spencer is the author of The Musical Theatre Writer's Survival Guide--a book that many writers have found valuable. He is a successful musical book writer and lyricist. David Spencer is also a script consultant for musicals. Contact him through his website www.aislesay.com/

Stuart Spencer Script Consultations

Stuart Spencer, a playwright, script consultant, teacher, and author of The Playwrights Guidebook, supports musical writers through feedback conversations. His work is ideal for the career writer who would like to culture his/her ability to make better artistic decisions. Here is his description of the service: "My approach is based on the same philosophy that you will find in my book, The Playwright's Guidebook. My emphasis is to encourage you to take risks and to expand your understanding of the craft in a safe environment. After I read your manuscript we will have a conversation about what your intentions are with your musical and how you can best attain them. Although we can certainly go into details, we'll begin with any macro challenges the script may face. I offer an hourlong consultation, with the possibility of extending the conversation if you prefer. My strength is on the book, but I'm also qualified to give general feedback on lyrics. Please contact me at StuartSpencer@nyc.rr.com or visit StuartSpencer.net if you'd like more information."


Jake Lloyd – Score and Script Consultant

Focusing on the importance of storytelling in all elements of the show (music, lyrics, book), Jake's goal is to help his clients form a consistent narrative that tells a compelling drama through the use of time-honored traditions and modern reinventions of the form. Jake is a composer, lyricist, and librettist. His musicals have been seen from off-Broadway to community and school stages. His education includes, studying with film/tv composer Chris Huges, the BMI Musical Theatre Workshop, and as a member of various theatre workshops across New York City. As an educator who is currently an active writer in the field, Jake applies the new insights gained through the development of his own musicals to the shows you are writing. See the contact form on www.thejakelloyd.com

Mainstreet Musicals Evaluation and Readings

Mainstreet Musicals experts are offering an evaluation service for new musicals that also provides the potential for a live reading with actors. Each submission is read by two Evaluators who each complete a written Evaluation Report. Evaluators also grade the works, and later, they are ranked. From the six top-ranked shows, Mainstreet's Guest Artistic Director will select three winners who will receive a staged reading of their show. Mainstreet Musicals - evaluaton. Read our article about Mainstreet Musicals

New Musicals Script Evaluations at Davenport Theatrical

Producer Ken Davenport and others at his office offer "Script coverage and consultation" service. They provide dramaturgical feedback for works in development. They can also comment your show's commercial potential and possible next steps. Go to Davenport Theatrical Script Coverage

Harry Cohen - Consultant Offering Feedback

From the website: "In years of working with many a musical, I have seen few that were producible as submitted to me. But I have seen many that could have been and were made producible with the proper revisions. Even a musical with no weaknesses has a hard road to fruition - one with flaws is destined for perpetual limbo.... I do an exhaustive analysis of every aspect of writing a musical: book; dialogue; character; tone; structure; and more..... see www.musicalsconsultant.com/

Workshops for New Musicals

The Musical Writerzine newsletter regularly lists opportunties for new musicals submissions to workshops or readings. Musical Writerzine Newsletter.

Also see our Production page for festivals, workshops, and other programs where you can submit new musicals for readings as part of your development process.

To send suggestions, comments, or questions write to carol@musicalschwartz.com

Above: Beating Broadway: An essential how-to book for writing musicals

Below: How Musicals Work - a valuable guide for writers




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